Sunday, 2 September 2012

Adding detail

This is a boring sentence I changed into an exciting sentence। This is the boring sentence I ate breakfast। This is the sentence I added detail to.
I slowly leaped out of my bed and came into the kitchen। I poured milk into a bowl and put it in to the microwave। Then I took two wheatbixs from the pantry and put it in the bowl and put some sugar and ate it for breakfast.